Tips & Tricks: Writing a Statement of Purpose that Wows

So, you’re interested in going to graduate school? No matter your motivation, pursuing an advanced degree is a very big decision, so, congratulations on taking that first step!

We want to make sure the application process is as smooth as possible, so we’re here to help you create an application that stands out.

Georgia State graduate programs have various admissions requirements, so check the Admissions Requirements section of the website for the program you’re interested in before starting an application. Graduate directors and college admissions teams often use statements of purpose to determine whether a candidate can be successful in the program – so this is the time to brag about yourself and your accomplishments.

How should I structure my personal statement?

While it may not feel like it, a personal statement is an essay, and should be structured as such. Your introductory paragraph should give the reader a general idea of what they can expect to learn about you in the body paragraphs, and the conclusion should reiterate all of the relevant points you made. You might find it helpful to create an outline to ensure your thoughts flow nicely.

What do I write about? 

Some graduate programs have specific points they want you to cover in a statement of purpose. If your program provides guidelines on what they expect, great! If not, that’s fine too! Think about your personal statement as if it’s a cover letter.

In a cover letter, you introduce yourself to a potential future employer and tell them why you will be a good fit for a position. Your personal statement should feel the same way; it’s your chance to show the admissions committee that you’re more than just the achievements listed on a resume. Here are some topics you could use to guide your writing:

• What are your motivations for pursuing a graduate degree?
• What adversity have you faced throughout your life that will make you a compelling candidate?
• What characteristics of this program drew you to it? Why do you think it’s a good fit for you and your career aspirations?
• What have you done throughout your education and career to prepare you for success in this graduate program?
• How have your personal and professional experiences prepared you to thrive in graduate school?
• What are your career goals and how will this degree help you reach them?
• What adversity have you faced throughout your life that will make you a compelling candidate?

How long should it be? 

The length will vary based on the program, your experience and your goals, but most personal statements are typically 500-1,000 words, or 1-2 single-spaced pages in length. Remember, brevity is key. Let your actions and outcomes speak to the personal qualities you want the admissions committee to know about you. Don’t just tell them you’re a hard worker, give them an example that proves it. This will help the words you choose be meaningful.

Before submitting your statement of purpose…

• Take a break and come back with a fresh set of eyes. You might catch something you missed in the moment.
• Ask a friend or colleague to review your statement of purpose.
• Make sure you’ve checked all of the boxes–does it highlight your strengths and speak to your aptitude for success in a graduate program? Does it meet the requirements laid out by the program (if applicable)?

Georgia State’s Center for the Advancement of Students and Alumni (CASA) Director Kyle Frantz Ph.D. shares her formula for drafting a personal statement that grabs the admission committee’s attention and sets you apart.